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Jenny Kwan

202 words · 11 sentences · 15 clauses

Replying to Guillaume Deschênes-Thériault (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to hear what my colleague has to say about the fact that, through the economic update, we are continuing to implement our action plan for official languages, with $4.1 billion to support the vitality of francophone communities everywhere outside Quebec. There are also various other investments that contribute to the vitality of our francophone communities. I would like to hear what she has to say about the importance of our official languages and the investments we are making to support the vitality of francophone communities.”
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73 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Procedure 10%Claims 74%The ask 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 21 wordsI will give an example of the challenges that, in British Columbia, and in Vancouver more specifically, we are faced with.Procedure Claims · 149 wordsWith the francophone community, particularly in the education sector, the federal government actually can ensure that provinces receive significant increases in funding to backstop this. Do members know what we are reduced to in our education system for children who want to have access to language training in French, in French immersion classes? We have to go in for a lottery draw.1 If someone is lucky enough, their name will be drawn, and then they can actually enrol in that particular school. Many students did not get that chance, including my own children, by the way. When they were little, I submitted their names into the draw, but sadly, none of my children’s names were drawn, 2and they could not get into French immersion.3 That is the reality Canadians are faced with. That is the reality British Columbians are faced with. That is the reality Vancouverites are faced with. The ask · 32 wordsI would call on the government members, instead of patting themselves on the back to say how swell they are doing, to look at where the problems are and to take action.Partly on point

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