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Leah Gazan

156 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade
C+
Average 67 / 100
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Positioning 17%Claims 43%Anecdote 27%Promise 13%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 26 wordsthis has been one of the most disappointing years of my nearly seven years in Parliament, watching the Carney government bulldoze constitutional rights and human rights.Positioning Claims · 67 wordsThe final blow came this week when the Liberals tabled new water legislation after years of failing to end long-term boil advisories.12 This bill does not recognize safe, clean water as a human right for first nations.3 Worse, it limits protections to reserve boundaries while ignoring aboriginal title and the reality that pollution from resource extraction flows beyond reserve lines, contaminating the waters our nations depend on.4Unearned certainty Anecdote · 42 wordsAs the session ends, I will return home to Winnipeg Centre, which I have lovingly nicknamed “the centre of the universe”. It is a community built on care and solidarity, where we understand the importance of always placing community at the centre.Anecdote Promise · 21 wordsI will rest, restore my spirit and return in the fall ready to keep fighting for a better future for everyone.Vague promise

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