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Marcus Powlowski

157 words · 7 sentences · 10 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 117 wordsif we as Canadians ask ourselves what things, what events, define who we are as a people, I think we would be hard-pressed to find anything more quintessentially Canadian than the triumphant moment when the captain of the Stanley Cup-winning team hoists the cup over his head. It is the moment many of us grow up dreaming about. Very few of us actually get to live that dream. However, one of my constituents did last Sunday, as Jordan Staal accepted the cup on behalf of the Carolina Hurricanes, hoisted it in the air and, for a moment, became king of Canada.1 Not only that, but he won the Conn Smythe Trophy as the playoff most valuable player.2 Positioning · 22 wordsSincerely, I think a lot of Canadians would agree with me in saying that life does not get any better than that.Positioning Thanks · 6 wordsI offer my congratulations to Jordan, ThanksClaims · 12 wordsand we look forward to him bringing home the cup this summer.

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