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Alex Ruff

160 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 22 wordsI rise today to recognize the family-run Tyson Downs Association for donating a new AED SaveStation at Harrison Park in Owen Sound.1Thanks Claims · 82 wordsTyson Downs was an exceptional 18-year-old athlete and lacrosse player who passed away suddenly in 2023 as the result of cardiac arrest.2 Yesterday, this new SaveStation was officially unveiled just outside the Harrison Park Inn in Owen Sound.3 It houses an automated external defibrillator that is now available to the public 24 hours a day, 7 days a week.4 Harrison Park is one of the busiest public spaces in our community.5 Families, athletes, visitors and community groups use it throughout the year. Reasoning · 16 wordsIn an emergency, having an AED close by can make the difference between life and death. Thanks · 40 wordsI want to thank the Tyson Downs Association, SaveStation, the Owen Sound Attack, the City of Owen Sound and everyone who helped make this possible. I congratulate them and thank them for helping to improve cardiac safety in our community.Thanks

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