Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
Not graded
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 67%Positioning 12%Thanks 20%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 21 wordsas Canada prepares to celebrate its 159th birthday, we have every reason to be proud of the country we call home.1Positioning · 11 wordsIn Leeds—Grenville—Thousand Islands—Rideau Lakes, that story is written into our landscape.PositioningClaims · 43 wordsThe Rideau Canal helped build a young nation.2The Thousand Islands became one of Canada’s great treasures.Our farmers have fed Canadians for generations.In every major conflict since Confederation, the men and women of our communities have answered the call to serve.Positioning · 5 wordsTheir story is Canada’s story.PositioningClaims · 23 wordsIt is a nation built with hard work by people who served when called and left a stronger country for the next generation.Thanks · 26 wordsAs we look ahead to July 1, may we celebrate the courage, service and sacrifice that built the Canada we are all proud to call home.Thanks