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Steven MacKinnon

132 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Pierre Poilievre (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, as the Prime Minister ends his third session, I ask this question: Are our groceries, gas and mortgage payments more affordable than they were a year ago, and are our streets safer or more riddled with crime? Aside from his endless announcements, excuses and promises, the Prime Minister has doubled the deficit and increased housing costs. Homebuilding is actually down. Gas, groceries and mortgage payments are nearing record highs. Will the Prime Minister put aside the illusions and stand up in this House of Commons now and defend his disastrous results?”
Statement grade
D+
50 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 10%Thanks 23%Claims 44%Positioning 6%Promise 17%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordswe are at the end of a session, ProcedureThanks · 30 wordsand I wish the Leader of the Opposition, his colleagues and obviously his family a restful summer, as I wish for all my colleagues on this side of the House.Thanks Claims · 40 wordsI want to point out that we are finishing one of the most productive legislative sessions in recent history. Twenty-one bills have become law through this chamber.1Off point We have passed the largest criminal justice reform in the history of Canada. Positioning · 8 wordsLiberals are the law and order party now.Positioning Claims · 18 wordsWe have put in place a series of measures to make life easier and more affordable for Canadians.Partly on point Procedure · 5 wordsWe are not stopping there.Procedure Promise · 23 wordsWe are going to continue the work.Vague promise We are going to build Canada strong, Vague promiseand we are going to make this country proud.Off pointVague promise

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