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Sean Fraser

105 words · 4 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Aslam Rana (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, constituents in my riding of Hamilton Centre elected this government to act quickly to strengthen Canada’s justice system, which is why we brought forward several pieces of criminal justice legislation in the first four months of this newly elected government. Can the Minister of Justice tell the House what reforms the government is introducing to help the justice system work efficiently in our communities?”
Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 26%Claims 50%Promise 25%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 27 wordsI want to thank my hon. colleague not only for his hard work, but also for his relentless pursuit of a stronger Canada and a safer Hamilton.Thanks Claims · 52 wordsAs a result of his advocacy, this House has adopted laws to completely renovate the bail system and to lead to stiffer sentences for violent repeat offenders.1 He has also lent his support to new laws to combat hate crimes and to attack the scourge of intimate partner violence in this country. Promise · 26 wordsWe are the party that is going to work with law enforcement to advance a law and order agenda, Vague promiseand most importantly, to keep Canadians safe.Partly on pointVague promise

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