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Sean Fraser

78 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Linda Lapointe (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, Quebec has already seen 10 femicides so far this year. Protecting women and victims is a top priority for Canadians across the country. Can the Minister of Justice tell us what reforms the government is making to help end gender-based violence?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 81 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 27%Positioning 17%Claims 27%Promise 29%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 21 wordsI want to acknowledge all the work done by my colleague, the member for Rivière-des-Mille-Îles, as chair of the women’s caucus.1Thanks Positioning · 13 wordsOur government is working hard to prevent gender-based violence before it even happens.PositioningVague promise Claims · 21 wordsBill C‑16 makes important reforms to the Criminal Code, particularly by creating new offences for femicide and coercive or controlling conduct.2 Promise · 23 wordsTogether, these reforms will result in a justice system that responds earlier and faster and provides greater protection to victims of gender-based violence.

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