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Lena Metlege Diab

73 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Michelle Rempel Garner (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Conservatives proposed a law that would ensure that non-citizens who commit serious crimes in Canada do not get sweetheart sentences so they can avoid deportation, but the Minister of Immigration voted against it. It is her job to maintain order in Canada’s immigration system, but the system is clearly out of control. Can the Minister of Immigration tell the victim of an assault why the non-citizen who assaulted them and then broke their no-contact order was given a lenient sentence so they would not be deported?”
Statement grade
C
62 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 73%Greeting 27%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 53 wordswe all know that anyone who commits a crime in this country, regardless of their immigration status, be it Canadian or not, is treated according to the law, to the fullest extent of the law.Unearned certainty Judges make decisions.2 There is absolutely nothing in the immigration law that allows for sentences to be discounted.1 Greeting · 20 wordsAs I stand here today, let me wish everybody a very happy Canada Day as we conclude the parliamentary session.Greeting

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