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Lena Metlege Diab

91 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Michelle Rempel Garner (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, non-citizens’ committing serious crimes in Canada and then getting sweetheart sentences in order to avoid deportation, which the Liberals are letting happen right now, is undermining Canadians’ desire for immigration. It is what is breaking the consensus on immigration in Canada, yet the Liberals stand up and say nothing is wrong. This is the immigration minister’s fault. I am going to give the minister one more time to answer, possibly the last time before a shuffle. Will her legacy in this role be closing this loophole, bringing these non-citizens to justice and deporting them?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
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Greeting 21%Aside 16%Reasoning 20%Claims 26%Promise 16%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 19 wordsI do want to wish the colleague a very happy July and August, wherever she is with her family.Greeting Aside · 15 wordsPerhaps in the fall she will come back with a bit of a better spirit.Aside Reasoning · 18 wordsWe have continuously said that no one can commit a crime with impunity. Serious crimes deserve serious consequences. Claims · 24 wordsThere is nothing in the immigration law that does not allow that.1 In fact, public safety and law enforcement have deported over 22,000 cases, 2Promise · 15 wordsand we will continue to work with law enforcement to ensure that we protect Canadians.Vague promise

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