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Sean Fraser

128 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Danielle Martin (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, coercive control is a pattern of abusive behaviour used to isolate and intimidate, often before or alongside physical violence. In every one of our communities today, women are being subjected to humiliation, isolation and financial and verbal abuse, which often escalate to physical and sexual violence. Our government is taking action. Can the Minister of Justice tell the House how Bill C-16 would better protect our constituents from coercive control?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
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Greeting 19%Positioning 5%Claims 48%Reasoning 27%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 24 wordslet me take this opportunity, for the first time, to formally congratulate my recently elected colleague on her presence in the House of Commons.1Greeting Positioning · 7 wordsThis institution is better for her efforts.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 62 wordsThrough her advocacy, we have moved forward with reforms that are designed to tackle the scourge of intimate partner violence that is impacting women across this country.2Vague promise We know, when it comes to coercive control, that we have the opportunity to put rules in place that allow the legal system to intervene before a relationship becomes violent and before violence becomes fatal.3 Reasoning · 35 wordsWe have worked with people who have dedicated their life and their career to understanding the predictive factors of what can lead to violence against women. With this codification of coercive control, we can make—4

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