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Sean Fraser

105 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Costas Menegakis (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, last year we lost 5,630 Canadians to the opioid crisis. That is 15 lives lost every day. Emmy Liu, 14 years old, was one of the increasingly alarming number of young Canadians whose lives were stolen by the fentanyl traffickers. These criminals who profit from producing and trafficking opioids should face serious consequences. That is why Conservatives introduced Bill C-289 to strengthen penalties for these criminals. Emmy’s legacy could be more than a tragedy. After the decade of Liberal rule that ushered in the opioid crisis, will the Liberals stop grandstanding and deliver results by supporting this bill?”
Statement grade
C–
Average 59 / 100
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Positioning 40%Promise 60%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 42 wordsas we move forward with a public safety agenda that is designed to ensure that dangerous people are put behind bars, it is not lost on us that we also need to do everything we can to combat the deadly opioid crisis.PositioningVague promise Promise · 63 wordsI look forward to working with all members of the House as we promote policies that would lead to better public health outcomes, and at the same time pursue policies that would contribute to better public safety outcomes.Vague promise I look forward to working with the member and with all members of the House in order to build safer communities right across this country.Partly on point

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