Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 15%Claims 64%Thanks 19%Aside 2%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 24 wordsI rise today to recognize a Kingston icon and one of the most celebrated town criers in the world: our very own Chris Whyman.ProcedureClaims · 103 wordsThis year marks more than four decades since Chris first donned the regalia and stepped into the role of Kingston’s official town crier in 1984.1What began as a one-year appointment has become a remarkable career, representing our city with pride, humour and a voice that can carry across Market Square.2Over the years, Chris has earned provincial, national and international acclaim, including multiple world championships, all while serving as an ambassador for Kingston’s history, culture and community spirit.3Whether he is welcoming visitors, opening festivals or representing Canada abroad, he brings an unmistakable energy that reflects the very best of our city.Thanks · 28 wordsOn behalf of the residents of Kingston, I congratulate Chris Whyman on his extraordinary service and thank him for more than 40 years of dedication to our community.ThanksAside · 4 wordsHear ye, hear ye.AsideThanks · 3 wordsWell done, Chris.Thanks