Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Greeting 52%Claims 37%Thanks 11%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 56 wordsI am excited to welcome everyone to Middlesex—London this summer for the Canadian Plowing Championships in Strathroy.1As the member of Parliament for this area, I am proud to extend a warm southwestern Ontario welcome to all of the competitors, families and visitors who have come from across Canada to take part in this national event.GreetingClaims · 52 wordsThis championship is a wonderful celebration of the skill, precision and innovation of Canadian farmers.Whether someone is a returning competitor or attending for the first time, they will enjoy exciting plowing competitions, hands-on exhibits and demonstrations of the latest agriculture techniques, all in the spirit of our rural community and hospitality.Thanks · 16 wordsI want to thank the volunteers, organizers and board members whose dedication makes this event possible.ThanksGreeting · 17 wordsWelcome to Strathroy.I hope everyone has a fantastic time at the Canadian Plowing Championships this summer.Greeting