A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 84%Positioning 7%The ask 10%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 6 wordssummer is just around the corner, Positioning · 12 wordsand there is no better place to be than on the Rock.PositioningClaims · 141 wordsWhether people want to go to Swift Current to see a world-class car collection, to Bonavista to see the icebergs, to the Burin Peninsula to hear the great stories of the famous pirates or to Lumsden to experience the best beaches north of Cuba, we have something for the whole family.If people cannot swim, they can take a boat ride to experience the whales in Port Rexton or the puffins in Elliston, or explore the secret underground bunkers.No matter where people go, I am sure they will experience the warm hospitality of my fellow Newfoundlanders and Labradorians.They will hear great jokes and eat delicious meals.This summer, they might even be able to catch a cod on a Wednesday afternoon.To end their trip, they can cool down and grab a brewski in the famous town of Dildo.The ask · 17 wordsCome on out.Catch the ferry or take a flight and come on home to the Rock.
