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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 159 wordsI rise today to honour the life of Mel Zajac, a remarkable British Columbian whose compassion and generosity left an enduring imprint.Mel’s life was marked by a profound tragedy that ultimately inspired a legacy of extraordinary philanthropy.In July 1986, he lost his son Mel Jr. in a tragic accident on the Chilliwack River.1Just eight months later, his son Marty was killed in an avalanche near Blue River in the Cariboo.2In their memory, Mel founded The Mel Jr. and Marty Zajac Foundation in 1987, dedicating himself to helping others.3Through his work, including the creation of Zajac Ranch, he ensured that children of all abilities could experience the joy, inclusion and confidence that come from summer camp.4Because of his vision, countless children and families, many of whom face major medical challenges, have been given opportunities that might otherwise have been out of reach.At the age of 98, we have lost a truly extraordinary Canadian.5Thanks · 22 wordsI extend my sincere condolences to the Zajac family and to all those who mourn Mel’s passing while celebrating his remarkable legacy.Thanks