“Mr. Speaker, I truly appreciate my colleague. Could he explain how the Liberal government led Canada into the only recession in the G20? This was due to a multitude of bad decisions and poor management. There are two issues I am still waiting for answers on: the $5-billion cost overruns for Cúram and the $200-million lease on a parcel of land. My questions are simple. When was the minister informed? Who signed those contracts? Lastly, will the Prime Minister scrap his failed policies?”
Statement grade
A–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 87 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Promise 12%Claims 68%Positioning 20%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Promise · 6 wordswe are going to keep going.Vague promiseClaims · 27 wordsCanadians know that, under Prime Minister Stephen Harper, 5,000 small businesses closed their doors.1Partly on pointCanadians know that the Canadian economy is under pressure from the United States.Positioning · 6 wordsNo, that is not an excuse.PositioningClaims · 12 wordsI heard my colleagues say that the international context is an excuse.Positioning · 14 wordsCome on, how could that be an excuse?It is very real, very tangible.PositioningClaims · 30 wordsThere is a trade war being waged by a partner that used to be trustworthy but is not anymore.2We in the government are helping businesses get back on track, Promise · 6 wordsand we are going to succeed.Vague promise