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Lena Metlege Diab

91 words · 5 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Scot Davidson (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, if all of these Liberal policies were working, our people would not be reduced to begging on the Internet just to get by. These programs do nothing for the millions of Canadians who are working full-time and still cannot afford groceries or rent because of the Liberals’ made-in-Canada recession. That is why they are forced into using food banks, crowdfunding online and living in RVs and parking lots. When will the Prime Minister reverse his costly policies, which have left Canadians with no other choice?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 79%Procedure 11%Positioning 10%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 15 wordsthat colleague has asked that question a number of times, and it has been answered.Off point Procedure · 10 wordsLet me tell him what Canadians do want to know.Procedure Claims · 57 wordsCanadians know that the government is focused on building a stronger economy to responsibly manage migration.Vague promise We have tightened our processes, Vague promiseand the latest numbers prove it: the temporary resident population is down 73%; 1asylum claims are down 63%; 2the non-permanent resident population has dropped for 18 consecutive months; 3and asking rents have dropped for 20 months.4 Positioning · 9 wordsNumbers do not lie, Unearned certaintyand our plan is working.PositioningOff point

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