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Sean Fraser

139 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Lianne Rood (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Liberal claims of success are completely detached from reality. Canadians are crowdfunding their way through this cost of living crisis, and the Prime Minister has blown nearly $1 million on luxury inflight catering on just 14 flights, including $175,000 on one single flight. That bill could feed a family in Middlesex—London for 55 years. Canadians cannot afford groceries, so will the Prime Minister stop his outrageous luxury lifestyle, on the taxpayer’s dime, and reverse his policy so Canadians can afford to live again?”
Statement grade
F
38 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 41%Procedure 9%Claims 50%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 23 wordswhen my Conservative colleagues see a vulnerable Canadian, they see a political opportunity to exploit. We see people who we want to help.PositioningOff point Procedure · 7 wordsThis question has been asked and answered.Procedure Positioning · 26 wordsIt has been fascinating to me, over the last number of weeks, how the Conservatives have completely dropped their focus on public safety in this country.PositioningOff point Procedure · 6 wordsLet me tell the House why.Procedure Claims · 69 wordsWe have a legislative agenda that is going into effect. The Bail and Sentencing Reform Act is now law in Canada.1 Later today, we are going to vote on the combatting hate act, 2and by the end of the week, we are going to adopt the protecting victims act.3Off point We can balance the economic interests of the country, the needs of families and public safety at the same time.Partly on point Positioning · 8 wordsLet us not just focus on political opportunities.PositioningOff point

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