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Patty Hajdu

105 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Fares Al Soud (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, young Canadians are eager to work, gain experience and build their careers. Whether it is a summer position, an internship or their first step into the workforce, landing that first job can make all the difference. Can the Minister of Jobs and Families update the House on how our government is connecting young Canadians with employers and creating opportunities for them to succeed?”
Statement grade
B
Average 75 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 11%Positioning 19%Promise 17%Claims 52%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 12 wordsI thank that member for his constant advocacy for opportunities for youth.Thanks Positioning · 20 wordsWe are proud on this side of the bench to have so many young representatives here in the government benches.PositioningOff point Promise · 18 wordsWe are very eager to work with them to ensure that youth have the best opportunities to succeed.Partly on pointVague promise Claims · 55 wordsIn fact, this year there are 100,000 Canada summer jobs across the country, in every riding in this country.1 It does not matter whether the ridings are Conservative, Liberal, NDP or Green, because youth all across this country have an opportunity to get that first job, those great skills and those connections in the workforce.

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