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Cathay Wagantall

2796 words · 171 sentences · 217 clauses

Statement grade
C–
57 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 53%Thanks 7%Procedure 5%Anecdote 18%Positioning 5%Aside 4%Promise 2%Reasoning 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 26 wordsI rise today to give my last speech in this place. Having been here since 2015, I am retiring as of the end of the summer, 1Off pointThanks · 5 wordsand I appreciate this opportunity.Thanks Procedure · 14 wordsI am going to begin with some comments about my husband, very briefly, though.Procedure Anecdote · 182 wordsHe is my rock. At the age of 14, I wrote in the front of my Bible, “I want to marry someone who puts God first, me second and our children third.” Well, God outdid himself, and I had the opportunity to marry a man to whom, in my card for Father’s Day, I wrote, “You are everything I ever dreamed of”, and then on the inside, it said, “plus a whole lot of things that never even crossed my mind.” We were married, have had quite an amazing life thus far and expect that to continue. Marty has a heart for ministry, so we went into ministry at a point later in our lives, and he was church planting, very entrepreneurial. There was a wonderful family from church we decided to take out for pizza one day, and they had a little girl named Katie.Off point She jumped out of the car when we got to the restaurant, ran up to Marty, jumped and said, “Look, God, I got new shoes.” I had to explain to Katie that he was not God.Anecdote Procedure · 31 wordsI say that because I want to extend it over now into my appreciation for the leader of the Conservative Party of Canada, the current leader of His Majesty’s official opposition.Procedure Anecdote · 4 wordsHe is not God, AnecdotePositioning · 32 wordsbut he is amazing. He has gifts that this country needs. He has the ability to process like no one I know. We experience this in our caucus meetings all the time.PositioningOff point Procedure · 4 wordsI will stop there, ProcedurePositioning · 20 wordsbut his heart is what drives him, as does his love for being a servant leader and caring about people.Positioning Claims · 46 wordsWhen my mom passed away, he phoned me. When this happens to anyone in our caucus, he makes that call, and no one ever feels rushed when he is talking with them. With what happened at Tumbler Ridge, he was there not just for the service.Off point Aside · 14 wordsI do not know if he would be appreciative that I am sharing this, AsidePositioning · 7 wordsbut it is just who he is.Positioning Claims · 18 wordsHe stayed until every one of those people had an opportunity to meet him and talk with him. Positioning · 18 wordsHe is gifted at understanding what needs to happen in this nation to give people their country back.PositioningOff point Thanks · 37 wordsI have been so honoured to be part of this caucus, and I wish nothing but the best for him as he moves forward with the most amazing group of people who serve in this caucus together.Thanks Aside · 14 wordsThey all want to be named, but I am not going to go there.Aside Positioning · 4 wordsWe are a team.Positioning Anecdote · 52 wordsWhat I love is something I learned when I was the only female on a board at a college where I was the athletic director. I learned, when I went to those meetings, to do my thing, make sure I am heard, argue as much as necessary and then go for coffee.Anecdote Positioning · 26 wordsThat is what this team does, and it will be the best thing to ever happen to Canada in well over a decade, if not longer.PositioningOff point Aside · 5 wordsI apologize to Mr. Harper, AsidePositioning · 10 wordsbut I think it is going to be even better.PositioningOff point Thanks · 10 wordsI am so appreciative of my leader and my colleagues.Thanks Procedure · 5 wordsThen there is my staff.Procedure Aside · 7 wordsI would love to name them all.Aside Thanks · 122 wordsI have been so blessed to have people in my office who love the things that I love, support the things that I support and go the extra mile over and over again to make sure I am prepared. I could not do my job without my staff who are in my riding and, certainly, those here on the Hill as well. I am so grateful for every one of them who has been a part of my team. I want to thank the pages and all the folks who help us out in the lobby and put up with us on a daily basis. They are remarkable. I have a special place in my heart for our PPS, our protective services.Thanks Anecdote · 184 wordsWhen I was not allowed to do my job on the Hill because I would not share my status in regard to the COVID-19 vaccine, I was not allowed to be in the House, but I decided to come in finally. The Sergeant-at-Arms figured that out and escorted me. I was going to be apprehended, I believe my whip said. I did not know what that meant, but the Sergeant-at-Arms just escorted me down the Hill, and I said that I did not hold him responsible for what he had to do. Nobody recognized me. They had phones outside the door here, over there and downstairs. They were trying to find me. They could not find me, because in every campaign, I look a little different. I said, “You have to do a better job of this.Off point You have to protect us.” The next day when I came to work somebody shared that there was an 8 1⁄2 by 11 laminated picture of me from Facebook on every desk in the precinct. To this day, they know who I am and that is great.AnecdoteOff point Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 29 wordsI am not going to split my time, just so you know. The things I want to share are the things that I loved having the responsibility for here.Procedure Claims · 16 wordsI have been on the Standing Committee on Veterans Affairs since I came to this role.2Off point Thanks · 9 wordsI have such a deep appreciation for our veterans.Thanks Claims · 20 wordsI am just a civilian; I had to learn, and I still do not know everything I need to know.Off point Thanks · 6 wordsThey are so gracious to me.Thanks Claims · 72 wordsIt means the world to me that I have had the opportunity to be part of the study, “Invisible No More”.3 Our women who joined the Armed Forces faced great duress because they were not really welcome there. Now Bill C-11 means that they do not get to make the choice of where they are going to take their cases, whether to the civilian court or to the Canadian Armed Forces court.4Off point Thanks · 16 wordsHowever, I love them and I appreciate the opportunity I had to be part of that.Thanks Claims · 65 wordsThere is a group called the Mefloquine Rally warriors who were injured by that drug, when it was taken for malaria back in the days of Somalia. Something terrible happened on that deployment. They have suffered, and the government has not recognized that. They will continue to fight until that recognition is given. It was done improperly; there was no study of this unlicensed drug. Positioning · 5 wordsIt is a huge issue, PositioningPromise · 18 wordsand I want them to know that I am with them and will continue to be with them. Claims · 41 wordsI have been to every event that they have had over the course of the past 10 years. They will not give up on asking for an apology, a return to the Somalia inquiry and the care that they should have.Off point Procedure · 11 wordsService dogs is another area that is very special to me.Procedure Aside · 41 wordsSaskatchewan is a lovely province.Off point Shame on all who have not been there yet. It is interesting, we only have 1.3 million people in that entire gorgeous province.5 Somehow even CBC forgets that we have weather when doing the weather report.Aside Claims · 36 wordsWe do have veterans. There are over 150 who are couch-surfing or living on the streets in places like Regina and Saskatoon.6 However, there is nothing there for them officially because our province is too small. Promise · 25 wordsWe have begun something called the Yorkton Veteran Foundation that is going to change that, Vague promiseand I am very excited about that in our future.Off point Claims · 409 wordsThe other thing that I will share today is that I have had the incredible opportunity in this place, to do not one, not two, but three different private members’ bills.7Off point For those at home, a private member’s bill is something that an individual member gets to speak on and bring forward to possibly be passed. It may or may not be part of the member’s party stance or something that is needed according to other people, but it is something very important to that member, their riding and the people they serve. Many members get their name pulled out of that hat, but never get the opportunity because they are too far down the list. My predecessor was here for 22 years, 8Off pointand I do not believe ever had that opportunity. My passion is caring about violence against women. The first bill was Bill C-225, protection of pregnant women and their preborn children act, Cassie and Molly’s law, in 2016.9 I phoned this young man named Jeff Durham from Windsor and asked if I could be helpful to him. He did not understand how what happened to his wife, who was seven months pregnant, meant that the law did not recognize her baby.Off point Now, we know there are issues around this topic in other ways, but this was a situation where she was confronted by an intruder in her home, someone she and her husband knew.Off point He worked alongside them. He panicked. He did not want what he was doing to be found out, so he attacked her and killed her. She was more than seven months pregnant, seven weeks from having her baby.Off point They had already named her Molly. The individual was charged, went through the whole system and was facing his sentence. Jeff could not believe that, through this whole thing, there was no mention of Molly.Off point It was like she did not exist, period. This was a mom who was excited about having her baby. She was not with Jeff anymore but they lived in the same block so that they would be close. They were setting up their baby rooms. I did what I could to bring that forward as Cassie and Molly’s law. Of course, in the House, it did not pass but it brought huge attention to the fact that pregnant women are the most vulnerable when it comes to femicide, Off pointyet, in the House, they are never included in that conversation. Positioning · 4 wordsI find that deplorable.Positioning Claims · 7 wordsI then did one on sex-selective abortion.Off point Positioning · 5 wordsOne has to ask why.Positioning Claims · 87 wordsThe Morgentaler decision was made, that it was too onerous for women to seek an abortion.Off point They struck down what was there, but the Supreme Court said that there must be new legislation and that it must come with a determination of when that fetus is considered viable.10 None of that has ever happened. When I brought this forward, it was because I do a lot of trade shows and whatnot.Off point I always have forms for people to sign, one on firearms and one on palliative care. Aside · 19 wordsWe have a member over on that side of the floor. I wonder if she will get it done.Aside Claims · 24 wordsI then had one on protecting pregnant women.Off point A lot of women came and talked to me and said they wanted access to abortion. Anecdote · 3 wordsI said, “Fine.”Anecdote Claims · 135 wordsThe truth is that 84% of Canadians want access to abortion.11Off point I said that there was a DART & Maru/BLUE poll that was done. The National Post headline said that Canadians are not as divided on this issue as politicians and media would like you to think. They went further and asked if respondents thought it was okay to have a sex-selective abortion.Off point The answer was no, that there should be a law against that. This came from the same 84% of people, as 16% of people did not fit into that category. They are for the abortion-at-any-time-for-any-reason law. Did we know that Canada has nothing? We have no laws. We are the only democratic country in the world that has nothing.12Off point Our only friend in that field, other than democratic countries, is North Korea. Positioning · 3 wordsThis is appalling.Positioning Claims · 43 wordsThat decision enabled me to bring forward the sex-selective abortion act.Off point Women and nurses, who are pro-choice, as the vast majority of these people are pro-choice, want choice but they do not want baby girls to be killed simply because they are girls.Off point Anecdote · 78 wordsI was in a feminist class. I was going to talk about being a woman in politics. As we walked in, the teacher said they had changed their mind, that they wanted to talk about that but that they had heard I had just put forward a bill on sex-selective abortion and they would like to talk about that.Off point I thought, I am in a feminist class. What is that going to feel like? They were absolutely appalled.Anecdote Claims · 6 wordsOf course, it did not pass.Off point Aside · 3 wordsThat is fine.Aside Claims · 142 wordsI then had one more opportunity under our leader, and I brought forward the violence against pregnant women act, regarding, again, a situation where a third party attacks a woman, knowing that she is pregnant, causing physical or mental harm. The only thing it was calling for was that it would be considered an aggravating factor. Joyce Arthur, who is the queen of the pro-abortion movement, said she could vote for it if it did these things, 13Off pointand it did them. It was two sentences. As soon as it was tabled, the previous prime minister and all of the women on the other side of the floor did a Twitter attack on me.14 When I had presented it in the House, in the first minute, when one just describes it, three colleagues from that side of the floor, women, clapped for it.Off point Procedure · 21 wordsI have to split my time apparently. I am already at 15 minutes, but I am told I can keep going.Procedure Reasoning · 52 wordsWhen they clapped for this particular bill, it told me that people on that side of the floor, whom I know, have friendships with and meet with on a regular basis, value protecting pregnant women and want to see recognition that when a woman is carrying a child, they should have protection. Claims · 134 wordsIn this case, Sherry and Chan Goberdhan lost their daughter, Arianna.Off point Arianna had a very frightening marriage. Her estranged husband wanted her to come over. She was due to deliver, and her mom said, “Don’t go.” She said, “It’s okay, he just wants to talk.” He proceeded to stab her in the abdomen 21 times.15Off point When he was in prison and wanted to have a relationship with another woman, he took the picture of their wedding, removed her picture and put his picture up. There are terrible people in this world who attack women and are in relationships where they are brutal. However, this case had absolutely nothing to do with anything that the pro-choice community does not want to see. It is for the protection of women when they are having their children. Reasoning · 33 wordsIf we are truly concerned about feminism and women being attacked, on that side of the floor and on this side of the floor, it is something we could have all agreed on, Off pointClaims · 4 wordsbut we do not, Aside · 4 wordsand that is fine.Aside Claims · 10 wordsThat is the reality of the makeup of the House. Procedure · 8 wordsI can tell members that, from that study, ProcedureClaims · 60 wordsand with 84% of Canadians wanting choice, when people saw that Twitter war, they went berserk online. We will not find any of the comments any more. They have been scrubbed.Hidden agency They are not there. However, they said, “What is wrong with you that you don’t understand this is about women needing protection? Why do you always bring up abortion?” Procedure · 6 wordsWell, I can tell members why.Procedure Claims · 49 wordsIt is because it has become a tool on that side of the floor, actually the whole House, other than our party where we get to vote according to our conscience, that will not allow anyone to be part of their caucus if they have the same values here.Off point Anecdote · 12 wordsAlthough, when the three women clapped, I thought, “Okay, this is good.”Anecdote Claims · 26 wordsThey actually ended up being three of the members who stood up in the House and tried to accuse me of bringing forward an anti-abortion law. Reasoning · 65 wordsThat tells us the kind of stress women on that side of the floor have, Off pointand people who value family and value women have, when women are being coerced within a terrible relationship or are facing a situation where they are being abducted, and the perpetrator is not accused of anything until they hurt that woman and possibly injure or kill the child as well. Aside · 17 wordsIt is tough to stand here today and say this on the day that I am leaving.Aside Claims · 8 wordsI know it is divisive in some ways, Reasoning · 10 wordsbut this place needs to represent Canadians and Canadians’ views.Off point Procedure · 2 wordsNever before—Procedure

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