Replying to Fraser Tolmie (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Mr. Speaker, my colleague across the aisle mentioned the former leader of the Progressive Conservative Party, Mr. Joe Clark. I actually have interactions with a former Liberal minister, Mr. Dan McTeague, who said that he did not leave the Liberal Party but that the Liberal Party left him. I think there is some give and take here. I would like to know what my colleague from Winnipeg North’s opinions are on Mr. McTeague. I feel as if the Liberal Party has lost its compass. It is way off and seems to be getting into everybody else’s business instead of looking after the business of looking after Canadians.”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 74. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 62%Reasoning 34%Procedure 4%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 51 wordsI will let the name of Joe Clark, one of Canada’s prime ministers, a Progressive Conservative, stand pretty high.1I can tell the member opposite that never before, at the doors, have as many people told me that they voted Conservative in the past but were voting Liberal this time around.2Reasoning · 30 wordsI truly believe it was because there is a great deal of contrast between the leader of the Conservative Party and today’s Prime Minister, the leader of the Liberal Party.Off pointProcedure · 5 wordsI can say one thing, ProcedureClaims · 26 wordswhich is that never before has the Liberal Party of Canada received as many votes as it did in the last election, under the current leadership.3Reasoning · 12 wordsI believe it has a lot to do with today’s Prime Minister.Off point