Replying to Michael Coteau (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Mr. Speaker, the member did mention just fighting hate, and he mentioned anti-hate legislation. A proposed change came through the Senate to include the noose as a hate symbol, which the Conservatives have voted against. Can you tell the House why it is important for us to put in place hate legislation and, more specifically, to fight against these hate symbols here in Canada?”
Statement grade
F
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 68. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 6 wordsI really do appreciate the question.ThanksProcedure · 18 wordsI think it is best answered by recounting what one of our senators said in addressing the bill.ProcedureClaims · 41 wordsShe talked about having a wonderful dinner at home and then going for a walk, during which she was harassed by some people in a truck who were saying some fairly harsh things.They actually had a noose in the truck.1Reasoning · 24 wordsIn order to really appreciate the hatred that, unfortunately, is still out there, we have to understand the impact of something of that nature.Claims · 16 wordsI do not deny the fact that the noose sends all sorts of strong, negative messages.Positioning · 6 wordsIt hurts people to the core.PositioningPromise · 10 wordsIt is time that we actually do something about it, Claims · 12 wordsand Bill C-9 addresses that particular issue and a whole lot more.2Off point