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Claude DeBellefeuille

187 words · 11 sentences · 15 clauses

Replying to Rhonda Kirkland (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I truly appreciate the work ethic of my friend and colleague who sits with me on the public safety committee and the amount that she has studied this bill. We studied it in depth, and I appreciate her being thankful for all the staff who have done this work with us as well. As we went through this very rushed process of pre-clause-by-clause, I think there were somewhere upward of 48 witnesses over just nine hours whom we sped through to try to study the bill. We had a hard time getting the briefs, as well, because it was rushed, and that created some problems. I asked for consent of the committee to bring the Privacy Commissioner in during clause-by-clause to help us. As we looked through the amendments, a lot of them he had suggested, we could not ask him questions very much during pre-clause-by-clause. Could the member comment on what she thought the Liberals were doing when they blocked the Privacy Commissioner from coming?”
Statement grade
B–
73 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 7%Procedure 3%Claims 37%Reasoning 43%Positioning 10%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 13 wordsI want to thank my colleague. I appreciate her thoroughness a great deal.Thanks Procedure · 5 wordsI spoke about that earlier.Procedure Claims · 16 wordsI ended my speech by saying that I would really have liked him to come back.1 Reasoning · 16 wordsI think that would have been a good thing for everyone, including members of the government. Positioning · 18 wordsFrom the start, however, I sensed that the dice were loaded and that we were basically marking time, PositioningReasoning · 35 wordsbecause there was not a lot of interest. I am not blaming committee members; as I said, there are party lines and members sometimes do things that they would not have necessarily chosen to do. Claims · 29 wordsHowever, I want to highlight that the Canadian Association of Journalists is concerned about this bill.2 It wonders whether journalistic sources, whistle-blowers and investigative journalists themselves could face threats.3 Reasoning · 30 wordsI find that disappointing, because I would have liked to have heard from the association’s representatives and to have explored these questions, which came to me after reading their brief.4 Claims · 25 wordsUnfortunately, we were unable to invite them because the study period was so short that it prevented us from hearing what they had to say.5Partly on point

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