“Madam Speaker, I thank the member for that very passionate speech. As opposition members, we propose to improve these types of bills with amendments. The Liberals characterize these amendments at committee stage as obstructions, yet all we are trying to do is make the bills better. Could the member tell us if there are amendments that can be implemented to achieve the objectives while still protecting privacy and civil rights?”
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Madam Speaker, Claims · 6 wordsthe NDP submitted dozens of amendments.1Reasoning · 46 wordsI believe that those amendments, along with some from other parties, would achieve that goal to develop proportionality and bring some balance to this legislation.The amendments would not fix everything, but they would be a good start for the government to adopt opposition member amendments, The ask · 11 wordsand not just go forward with government or Liberal member amendments.Claims · 13 wordsThat is the track record so far with what has happened at committee, Positioning · 8 wordsand I think it is the wrong track.Positioning
