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Jenny Kwan

154 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Replying to Tako Van Popta (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, earlier in debate tonight, we heard from the Liberal side of the House suggesting that anybody who was opposed to Bill C‑22 was fearmongering and spreading misinformation. However, the very rational debate coming from the member for Vancouver East would suggest otherwise. Also, I am reading a Global News story that says that social media platforms, satellite companies and telecommunication companies will consider leaving Canada if and when Bill C‑22 passes because they are afraid they are not going to be able to maintain their customers’ privacy, something that they are committed to doing. The secondary concern of these companies seems to be the additional cost of having to maintain digital information for a long period of time. Can the member for Vancouver East comment on those very rational concerns?”
Statement grade
A
Average 92 / 100
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Aside 10%Claims 63%Positioning 14%Reasoning 13%

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Madam Speaker, Aside · 15 wordsit is very unusual for me, as a New Democrat, to agree with the Conservatives.Aside Claims · 18 wordsOn this bill, the Conservatives, the NDP, the Greens and the Bloc are all offering the same voice.1 Positioning · 8 wordsWhat message does that send to the government?Positioning Reasoning · 11 wordsI think the message is that the government got it wrong. Claims · 79 wordsTo the member’s question about businesses being worried, yes, some of them have indicated to me that they would actually leave Canada should Bill C‑22 proceed because it would put their companies in jeopardy on the privacy protections for their customers.2 Equally to the point, it would put them in a liability situation should there be a breach. The backdoor mechanism would create a breach that could actually violate people’s privacy and put those companies in a liability situation. Positioning · 14 wordsOnce the cat is out of the bag, we cannot put it back in.Positioning Reasoning · 9 wordsThat is why we cannot ram through this bill.

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