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Rhonda Kirkland

106 words · 7 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Ryan Turnbull (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Madam Speaker, I know the member. She and I share a border, being from Oshawa and Durham region, respectively. I know that our chief of police and the Durham Regional Police Service have been asking for lawful access. This is a tool that our government was elected to give police officers, police forces and law enforcement agencies across Canada to be able to do the investigative work they need to do. If the member opposite is truly tough on crime and listens to our police force and law enforcement, then what I want to say is that obstruction is not the same as scrutiny. What we have seen from the Conservative Party is obstruction. I witnessed it on the finance committee just last week, with 25 hours of time wasted, only to be told that it was really about another bill in another committee. The Conservatives held us hostage for ransom. If the member opposite was so concerned about time for debate, then what does she have to say about the waste of time that her colleagues have perpetrated in other committees? Some hon. members: Oh, oh!”
Statement grade
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86 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 3%Claims 32%Aside 9%Positioning 26%Reasoning 29%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Procedure · 3 wordsit is true: ProcedureUnearned certaintyClaims · 8 wordsI do share a border with the member.1 Aside · 10 wordsI would argue that common sense ends at that border.Aside Positioning · 17 wordsQuite frankly, Durham Regional Police Service and Durham Regional Police Association know that I stand with them.Positioning Claims · 8 wordsI have spoken to them about the bill, Positioning · 11 wordsand I have been very clear about my stand on it.Positioning Reasoning · 31 wordsI want them to have the tools they need, but I do not want them to have this at the expense of the privacy rights or the charter rights of Canadians. Claims · 18 wordsEvery officer I spoke to agreed with me. They want it, but not at the expense of privacy.

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