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Simon-Pierre Savard-Tremblay

126 words · 9 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, can I get the member’s perspective on the recommendation brought forward by Justice Arbour to do that complete transfer, and can the member acknowledge that there would have been a great deal of effort in coming up with that recommendation? Is it the Bloc party’s position, as it for the Conservatives, that they should just disregard that recommendation?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 71 / 100
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Positioning 14%Claims 51%Procedure 11%Reasoning 24%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 12 wordsit never ceases to amaze me how my colleague opposite never listens.Positioning Claims · 18 wordsHe gets up, walks around, talks and then asks a question that I already answered in my speech. Positioning · 6 wordsWe have come to expect it.PositioningOff point Procedure · 11 wordsAs I said, this is not about complete freedom of choice.Procedure Claims · 26 wordsThe amendment known as BQ‑2 did not involve complete freedom of choice.1 What the amendment said is that not every case needs to be automatically transferred. Reasoning · 30 wordsOur initial response would be to transfer these cases, but if experts and the civilian system consider it advisable to keep them in the military system, that would be allowed. Procedure · 3 wordsThat is all.Procedure Claims · 20 wordsI will close by saying that Justice Arbour could have come and testified, 2as she was also invited to do.Off point

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