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Kevin Lamoureux

60 words · 2 sentences · 3 clauses

Replying to Sherry Romanado (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, the reality is that the reason for Justice Arbour making that recommendation is that members of the Canadian Armed Forces who were sexually assaulted in the military were not coming forward out of fear of retribution. They did not want their case to be investigated and tried by their own employer. Can the member elaborate on that?”
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Positioning 88%The ask 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 53 wordsI believe Justice Arbour has done an excellent job in making a statement that is very simple and easy to understand. At the end of the day, I would ultimately argue that the effort and work that the Canadian Forces did, along with what Justice Arbour did, should be respected within the chamber, PositioningVague promiseThe ask · 7 wordsand we should be getting behind it.Off point

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