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Pierre Paul-Hus

153 words · 10 sentences · 16 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I am not sure if the Conservatives have really thought the amendments through. What they are doing is making the suggestion that we should have a dual system, one that provides a choice. Justice Arbour would no doubt have reviewed that particular option. She has done her homework in the consultations, in working with literally hundreds of victims and others, to come up with a recommendation that clearly states it should be a civilian system. My question for the Conservative Party, in particular this member, is this: Is Justice Arbour wrong in her recommendation?”
Statement grade
C
60 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 63%Procedure 10%Reasoning 27%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 30 wordsit would have been very interesting to hear what Judge Arbour had to say to the committee, but she refused to come.1 She did not come to explain her report.Off point Procedure · 1 wordsObviously, ProcedureUnearned certaintyReasoning · 26 wordsif the committee members had been able to ask her questions and gain a clearer understanding of what she intended, that might have changed certain things. Claims · 15 wordsEither she did not want to come, or the government advised her not to come. Procedure · 14 wordsI do not know which it was.Off point In any case, our position remains clear, ProcedureClaims · 51 wordsand the Bloc Québécois agrees with us. In fact, I believe it was the Bloc Québécois that proposed the amendment.2Off point The military justice system exists. It has flaws that need to be addressed, but the civilian system is not the ultimate solution, as it is already bogged down with management issues. Reasoning · 16 wordsIn that context, keeping the military system as an option was the best course of action.

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