“Mr. Speaker, the hon. member talked a lot about the committee and that sort of thing. The hon. member has the role of shadow minister. Could he explain some of the interventions he has had with people outside of the committee, such as the regular forces who have come to him and the everyday experiences he has had, back and forth, with them?”
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The average of Signal, Relevance and Clarity is 51. The grade is held to 40, 30 above Relevance.
40 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 65%Positioning 35%
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 72 wordsif I were to really summarize what I hear from veterans all the time, Vague promiseand I hear it frequently, it is probably summarized best in the words of former prime minister Justin Trudeau when he told veterans they were “asking for more than we [can] give”.1That is what veterans feel like they are being told by the government, consistently and constantly, that they are asking for more than we can give.Positioning · 46 wordsFrankly, we can never give enough.Our veterans, who serve the country, who are willing to lay down their lives for the country, deserve to be treated with respect.They deserve to have what they are entitled to for the service they gave to the country.PositioningClaims · 13 wordsRight now, they are not seeing it and they are expressing their alarm.Off point