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Blake Richards

112 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Tim Watchorn (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to hear my colleague’s thoughts on workplace safety. Does he know anywhere in the world where someone who reports a sexual crime gets investigated, prosecuted and judged by his peers? Does that make any sense to him?”
Statement grade
D–
40 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 71%Procedure 16%The ask 13%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 10 wordsI am not sure that anyone here is suggesting that. Procedure · 18 wordsIf we are to talk about workplace safety, let me talk about the workplace our veterans serve in.Procedure Claims · 69 wordsOur veterans are willing to lay down their lives for this country. They put themselves in the most difficult positions, ones that any of us could never even imagine. They do that because the government asks them to do that. The only thing that they expect in return is that the government takes care of them and listens to what they need. That is not happening under the government. The ask · 15 wordsIt is about time the government starts listening to veterans and providing what veterans deserve.Off pointVague promise

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