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Cathay Wagantall

106 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, Justice Arbour came up with a recommendation to transfer cases to the civilian process. A previous standing committee of the House put forward a report, which the member indicated that she voted for, that said to do exactly what this legislation purports to do Justice Arbour would have met with literally hundreds of victims. Combined, we are probably talking about well over 1,000 people, directly and indirectly. I believe she did her homework. Based on the expertise she brought to the table and the people she consulted with, she came up with that recommendation. Does the member believe Justice Arbour is wrong in her recommendation?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 10%Claims 55%Positioning 35%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 11 wordsthe tone in which the member presented his question is appreciated.Procedure Claims · 5 wordsI voted for the report.1 Positioning · 29 wordsWhen we voted for that report, we were saying to all those suffering individuals that we were there for them, we heard them and we wanted to see change.Positioning Claims · 48 wordsI voted for that recommendation at that time. Over time, those same individuals who gave testimony have had time to process it.Off point What is interesting is that what ended up being the recommendation in that report is also a recommendation that was put forward by that one individual. Positioning · 8 wordsThere are others who did excellent work too.PositioningOff point Claims · 5 wordsIt needs to be changed.

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