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Kristina Tesser Derksen

142 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Sherry Romanado (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I would like to thank my colleague for her incredible support for members of the Canadian Armed Forces. She mentioned that she is a lawyer and has worked in this kind of field. I would like to ask her if she knows of any other workplace where an employee who is a victim of sexual assault would have to report that sexual assault to their employer and have it investigated by their own employer.”
Statement grade
A+
Average 97 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 42%Reasoning 51%Procedure 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 50 wordswhat my colleague has asked really goes to the crux of what Justice Arbour found in her report.1 I would say that no, I do not know of any other situation where a victim would potentially have to come forward to superiors or have the case heard within a workplace. Reasoning · 8 wordsI think we have to be very cautious. Claims · 10 wordsI know my opposition colleagues have been talking about options, Reasoning · 64 wordsbut we have to be cautious about weighing options and certainty, and we have to be very cautious that we do not underestimate the potential pressure or coercion a victim may be subjected to by superiors within the workplace to have their complaint heard, in this example, in a military court because there could be more favourable conditions to the accused in that situation. Procedure · 10 wordsThat is something we have to be very cognizant of.Procedure

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