“Mr. Speaker, I want to thank my friend from Cowichan—Malahat—Langford for his service to Canada and the Royal Canadian Navy and his great work in standing up for victims. I first met the member’s wife, Angel, who has also been a strong advocate of fighting for the survivors of military sexual trauma, when I was doing town halls across this country on military injuries, including military sexual trauma. Ever since then, she has been fighting for justice. After all of the committee hearings, the member and I and many others here have talked to veterans and current serving members across the country, and, particularly, the brave witnesses who stepped up at the national defence committee to look at Bill C-11 and lay out all their experiences. By the Liberals rejecting their testimony today in this debate, will that revictimize them knowing that the Liberals are brushing everything off?”
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Greeting 16%Claims 33%Anecdote 12%Positioning 40%
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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 16 wordsI thank my colleague for all the amazing work he has done over the many years.GreetingClaims · 7 wordsSimply put, yes, it will retraumatize them.Unearned certaintyAnecdote · 12 wordsI started receiving numerous phone calls last night.They came flooding in.AnecdoteClaims · 27 wordsIt will retraumatize victims now and in the future.Simply put, the amendments that we have put forward would make this work.Vague promiseThe victims want the choice, Positioning · 41 wordsand we are supporting them based on fact, emotion and support.Clearly, a bill that would not address the majority of sexual assault cases and let them go unresolved would be a partisan decision that no sane human would vote for.PositioningUnearned certainty