Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Andrew Lawton

188 words · 11 sentences · 20 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Claims 51%Positioning 19%The ask 7%Thanks 22%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 21 wordssmall businesses are the backbone of the Canadian economy, and that is truer than ever in St. Thomas, Elgin and London. Positioning · 17 wordsOur small business owners are an incredible testament to the resilience, grit and innovativeness of our community.Positioning Claims · 21 wordsSome of our amazing entrepreneurs and professionals were recognized Friday at the St. Thomas and District Chamber of Commerce Impact Awards.1 The ask · 14 wordsI hope this House will join me in congratulating this year’s Impact Award winners: Thanks · 35 wordsreal estate agent Ainslee Tracey; the delicious Taco House Co.; Dr. Joseph Mai of Central Community Health Centre; Our Place Respite; Element5; Yarmouth Group; and the Business of the Year Award winner, Evelyn’s Sausage Kitchen.4Thanks Positioning · 11 wordsThey and all the nominees represent the best of our community.Positioning Claims · 11 wordsThey create jobs, opportunity and vitality for St. Thomas and Elgin. Positioning · 8 wordsHowever, entrepreneurs back home do not walk alone.Positioning Claims · 43 wordsMy office is a proud member of the St. Thomas and District Chamber of Commerce.2 In Ottawa today from the chamber are Maria Fiallos, Paul Jenkins and Christy Hunking.3 They are here representing our community. They are making sure small businesses can succeed, Thanks · 7 wordsand I thank them for their efforts.Thanks

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