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Evan Solomon

125 words · 10 sentences · 13 clauses

Replying to Connie Cody (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, just one year ago, the Prime Minister was telling everybody who would listen that he would get a trade deal with the Americans by last July. He set the deadline. He made that commitment. Now, the Prime Minister has surrendered as tariffs on steel have doubled, tariffs on lumber have tripled, and the tariffs on manufacturers got bigger. The workers and job creators in my community now know that the Prime Minister’s promises were more empty words from just another Liberal politician. He says our relationship with the U.S. is a weakness, but is the real weakness not the Prime Minister’s constant over-promising and underdelivering when it comes to U.S.-Canada trade?”
Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 40%Procedure 6%Claims 38%The question 16%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 45 wordsall these guys do every day in the middle of a trade war is talk down the economy and tear down the country. We are doing the real work of investing in sectors and building it up.Vague promise The Conservatives just want to tear it down.Positioning Procedure · 8 wordsLet me ask what they would tear down.Procedure Claims · 21 wordsHere is a list of projects we have invested in. We invested in Northern Transformer.1 It is in a Conservative riding; 2Positioning · 5 wordsthey do not want it.Positioning Claims · 26 wordsWe invested in Sensor Technology in Collingwood; 3they do not want it. We invested in Axe Living in a Conservative riding; 4they do not want it. The question · 20 wordsWhy will the Conservatives not listen to their own businesses and their own ridings and build Canada strong with us?Off point

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