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Ali Ehsassi

73 words · 3 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Rob Moore (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, we have the only shrinking economy in the G7. As the Prime Minister dithers, even Mexico is making progress on a deal. Why does he seem to keep wanting to drag this on? Why is he not fighting for the 2.6 million Canadians whose jobs rely on trade with the U.S.? With millions of jobs at stake, when will the Prime Minister deliver results instead of the same speeches, excuses and failures?”
Statement grade
C
60 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 16%Claims 63%Promise 21%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 12 wordsonce again, allow me to emphasize that we stand at the ready.PositioningOff pointVague promise Claims · 46 wordsFor the past several months, we have been consulting with the provinces, consulting with the territories, consulting with businesses and consulting with labour leaders, 1so everyone is fully aware that we are doing as much as can be expected and we will be acting very strongly.Vague promiseUnearned certainty Promise · 15 wordsThe member can rest assured that we will only agree to a very good deal.Vague promise

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