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Tim Hodgson

83 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Kyle Seeback (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberal answer to the tens of thousands of Canadians who have lost their jobs about their strategy of delay is tell them to not worry about their EI, not worry about their families and not worry about how they are going to pay their mortgages because they signed a free trade deal with Ecuador, which is a rounding error in Canada’s GDP. If these Liberals are serious, they will explain why they decided their strategy is to not negotiate to try to get a deal on the tariffs that affect the 2.6 million Canadians whose jobs are tied to trade. When will they go back to the negotiating table to protect those jobs?”
Statement grade
D+
50 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Promise 33%Procedure 13%Claims 46%Positioning 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Promise · 27 wordsMr Speaker, what we have said is that we will not do a bad deal. What we will do is control our own destiny.Vague promise We will build.Vague promise Procedure · 7 wordsLet me give the member some examples: ProcedureClaims · 38 words$8 billion to 5 Wing Goose Bay, a new wind farm in New Brunswick, a new intertie in New Brunswick, a new port in Montreal, a new graphite mine in Quebec and a new nuclear reactor in Ontario.1 Procedure · 4 wordsI could keep going.Procedure Positioning · 7 wordsThat is how we build Canada strong.PositioningOff point

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