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Rebecca Alty

233 words · 11 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Jamie Schmale (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to thank the minister for her speech. I hope she had a very productive summer. As said many times in this debate, we agree with the diagnosis that governments of all stripes over 155-plus years have fallen short on their commitments with indigenous people. What we disagree with is the prescription that the government is coming out with now. We agree with modern treaties. In fact, the Harper government signed six throughout its term from 2006 to 2015. What we have an issue with is that during committee we heard that there would be no guarantee, other than naming and shaming departments that are falling short on their commitments, that there would be fewer court cases. Also, through multiple Auditor General reports showing failures within both departments, ISC and Crown-indigenous relations, we have found years of failure but no correction. In fact, on May 4, 2006, we see, “Overall, Indigenous Services Canada did not effectively implement, monitor, or assess the New Fiscal Relationship initiatives it committed to with First Nation.” That was signed in 2016. This is a recent example. To the minister’s word, let us go from intention to implementation. Why have we not started already?”
Statement grade
B–
71 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Positioning 2%Claims 82%Procedure 3%Reasoning 7%The ask 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 4 wordsit is important work.Positioning Claims · 111 wordsHaving a commissioner for modern treaty implementation has been a call from modern treaty partners. As to the importance of the commissioner, they would be an agent of Parliament who would submit reviews and performance audits directly to Parliament.1 It is really important to note that the whole-of-government approach the commissioner would be taking is an opportunity for them to make findings and recommendations regarding implementation and to really be able to work with modern treaty partners and government to improve our relationships. It is an opportunity to have findings and recommendations, to make sure they are public and to make sure we are reporting on the progress that is made.Partly on point Procedure · 6 wordsThat is a really important part.Procedure Claims · 15 wordsA lot of the audits may show the areas where we need to do work, Reasoning · 17 wordsbut it is equally important to show the areas where we have done a lot of work. Claims · 6 wordsThe commissioner would have that opportunity, The ask · 14 wordsand I encourage all members of the House to continue to support this work. Claims · 60 wordsAgain, this bill was co-drafted with modern treaty partners.2 It is a call they have been asking Parliament to take up. It is also related to the United Nations Declaration on the Rights of Indigenous Peoples Act action plan that the government has, specifically chapter 5, section 9, 3which states that the co-development of indigenous modern treaties is really important.Partly on point

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