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Rebecca Alty

163 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Jamie Schmale (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, we have listened to the minister’s responses over the past few minutes, and we still have not heard any concrete action the government has taken to correct the mistakes shown in multiple auditors general reports. We still have outstanding issues dealing with education, drinking water, governance and programs, and the list goes on. Unfortunately, there has been no correction. This is the issue we raised about Bill C-10. There were no mechanisms to have enforcement, as I said earlier, other than naming and shaming. What actions is the government going to take to get results for indigenous people and, in this case, first nations?”
Statement grade
A
Average 92 / 100
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Claims 76%Reasoning 24%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 20 wordswhen looking at the socio-economic conditions of modern treaty partner communities, we see there is an increase in socio-economic conditions, Reasoning · 9 wordswhich shows the importance and value of modern treaties. Claims · 104 wordsI would highlight that it is for the commissioner to continue to strengthen our relationships.Partly on point The commissioner would conduct independent and expert oversight of any activities carried out by the government, would seek to ensure timely and effective implementation and would report directly to Parliament to hold the government accountable on the relationships, objectives and obligations.1 This is an important report that would be coming to Parliament so that all parliamentarians could see the work being done throughout the year. They would have the opportunity to see what is working and the areas where we need to step up and continue to make progress. Reasoning · 30 wordsThe opportunity and benefit of the commissioner for modern treaties lie in continuing to grow this relationship and highlighting the work that is ongoing and still needs to be done.Partly on point

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