“Mr. Speaker, I would like to ask a question about the bill’s shortcomings. Obviously, we are here to debate. However, although the government is saying that the bill will fully address the demands of the various indigenous communities, we know that there are problems with it that could result in the demands or desires of first nations and Inuit not being taken into account, even if there is a commissioner.”
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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 83 wordsindeed there are a lot of gaps in Bill C-10.As a matter of fact, we are saying that the commissioner is not necessary.It would just be another layer of bureaucracy.We already have the Auditor General’s office, which has been reporting on government deficiencies in implementing the modern treaties, 1but rather than admit that it has mismanaged the file, in typical Liberal fashion the government has just made another announcement about another organization that is finally going to solve the problems.Reasoning · 9 wordsI remain unconvinced that this is going to happen.The ask · 21 wordsWhat we need is for the government to roll up its sleeves, get the job done and get it done now.
