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Elizabeth May

151 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 67 wordsCanada lost one of our greatest scientists. Globally respected environmental scientist and leader, Dr. Jim Bruce, died in his 89th year, 1as ever, with his wonderful, dear wife Ruth of 77 years at his side.2 Jim led the way in water policy science in this country and globally, served with the World Meteorological Organization and was one of the founders of the Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change.3 Positioning · 12 wordsWe have lost his voice, but we have not lost his words.Positioning Claims · 46 wordsHe wrote, in June 1988, as the consensus statement of our first international scientific conference in Toronto, “Humanity is conducting an unintended, uncontrolled, globally pervasive experiment whose ultimate consequences could be second only to a global nuclear war.”4 In his memory, it is not too late. Promise · 26 wordsWe must redouble our efforts. In the name of Dr. Jim Bruce and all he stood for, we must save all we can while we can.

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