Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Ernie Klassen

173 words · 9 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 81 / 100
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Positioning 20%Claims 51%Anecdote 14%The ask 14%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 16 wordsas Parliament resumes, I am reminded that the strength of Canada is found in our communities.Positioning Claims · 49 wordsDuring the last few months, I met with local businesses, community organizations and residents, attended community celebrations, hosted several round tables and saw young people developing valuable skills and experience through the Canada summer jobs program.1 I had the privilege of participating in the Special Olympics Canada Summer Games.2 Anecdote · 25 wordsWatching my son compete alongside other athletes with disabilities was a powerful reminder that perseverance and teamwork are at the heart of the Canadian spirit.Anecdote Claims · 40 wordsIn Amsterdam, I represented Canada at a human rights conference where I was reminded that our country continues to be respected around the world for the values we uphold.3 As the Prime Minister says, Canada has what the world wants.4 Positioning · 18 wordsThat strength begins in our communities where Canadians show that when we work together, challenges can be overcome.PositioningUnearned certainty The ask · 25 wordsLet us bring that same spirit of unity, pride, optimism and determination to this House. Let us work together and build an even stronger Canada.

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