Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Salma Zahid

148 words · 9 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 91 / 100
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Aside 9%Claims 68%Positioning 7%Promise 15%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 14 wordsas the leaves turn and children head back to school, fall has officially arrived.Aside Claims · 25 wordsThis summer, I had the privilege of connecting with families across my riding at our community barbecue and ice cream socials and on their doorsteps. Positioning · 11 wordsAs we return to Ottawa, their priorities are my driving force.Positioning Claims · 33 wordsOur constituents are watching our relationship with the United States very closely. Under the leadership of the Prime Minister, our government stood firm and walked away from a deal that surrendered too much.1 Promise · 16 wordsWe remain ready to negotiate, but never at the expense of Canadian jobs or Canadian sovereignty. Claims · 43 wordsInstead, we are actively diversifying our trade to grow a resilient economy and seeking deeper partnerships with our allies. Closer to home, we are tackling affordability head-on, building more homes people can afford, eliminating the excise tax on gas and lowering grocery prices.2 Promise · 6 wordsTogether, we will build Canada strong.Vague promise

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