“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister’s own environment department’s report reveals that the impact of the fuel standard is seven cents this year, rising to 17¢ per litre by the end of the decade, so he should check his own documents, or he should listen to Justin, who told me in a letter on August 11, “I cannot afford to eat properly. I skip meals and rely on cereal for breakfast. I’m incredibly frugal, but my debts are still growing faster. I constantly stress and cry over my financials. The middle class is being eliminated.” Will the Prime Minister look Justin in the eye and tell him that affordability is the best it has been in a decade?”
Statement grade
D+
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Average 52 / 100
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Positioning 67%Claims 33%
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 20 wordsthis government is working for Justin.Partly on pointThis government is working for Justine, and the Justins and Justines across this country.PositioningOff pointClaims · 27 wordsWe are working to create jobs, 200,000 jobs net over the course of the last year, with the fastest growth in the G7 in the last quarter.12Partly on pointPositioning · 36 wordsWe are making this country more independent from the United States, more resilient and more prosperous.Off pointVague promiseWhile we are doing that, we are providing Canadians like Justin with a boost today and a bridge to tomorrow.PositioningPartly on pointVague promise