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Tim Hodgson

54 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Rhonda Kirkland (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Oshawa has one of the highest unemployment rates in the country, and I hear the same message every time I meet with local auto workers and their families: “Protect our jobs.” Conservatives have proposed taking the GST off Canadian-made vehicles. We have even found $150 billion in savings by cutting items like high-priced consultants, corporate welfare and bureaucracy. Will the Liberal government eliminate the industrial carbon tax, cut wasteful spending and lower the cost of building homes and vehicles here at home?”
Statement grade
C–
59 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 39%Claims 61%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 10 wordsrather than scare Canadians, we are helping Canadians have hope.PositioningOff pointVague promise Claims · 33 wordsThat is why today, with the Ontario government, we announced that the Pickering refurbishment is going to move forward.1 That is 30,500 new jobs.2 That is $26 billion of new investment in Ontario.3Partly on point Positioning · 11 wordsMaybe the Conservatives might want to help us build Canada strong.PositioningOff point

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