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Patty Hajdu

94 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Connie Cody (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canadians are being forced to make impossible choices to make ends meet. Mark, a 73-year-old senior in my community of Cambridge, retired at 65, but in this affordability crisis, he has been forced back into the workforce because his retirement income is no longer enough to pay today’s higher cost of living. This Canadian is not asking for a handout. He is asking for the financial security he earned through a lifetime of hard work. When will the Liberal government stand up for our retired seniors and adopt our Conservative economic plan, which saves Canadians money, so seniors such as Mark can retire with dignity?”
Statement grade
F
38 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 76%Positioning 24%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 71 wordsMark will be very happy to know that we index all our benefits to inflation.1Partly on point In fact, I wonder if Mark knows that the member is voting against his interests every time she stands up in the House.2 I wonder if Mark knows that every time we strengthen our social safety nets, not just for seniors but for children and the next generation as well, she votes against those people too.3 Positioning · 23 wordsOn this side, we are going to stand up for Canadians.Vague promise It is what we have been doing every day, despite the Conservatives.PositioningOff point

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