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Mélanie Joly

111 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Michael Guglielmin (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, a Desjardins report confirms there is a double tariff shock on manufacturing businesses here in Canada. A business owner in Woodbridge was not only hit by crushing 50% tariffs on his exports to the U.S. but also recently lost a steel drum contract due to a 50% countertariff imposed by his own government. Washington started this trade war, but how is the Prime Minister going to ensure that Canada’s response does not place an undue burden on Canadian businesses and consumers?”
Statement grade
B–
74 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 41%Reasoning 44%Promise 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 25 wordsI know my colleague well and I know where he comes from. There is indeed a very important auto sector that uses our Canadian steel.2 Reasoning · 18 wordsWe also need to make sure that sector continues to be competitive, as well as the steel sector. Claims · 13 wordsThese two sectors have been targeted by many of the American administration’s tariffs.1 Reasoning · 31 wordsMeanwhile, we are fighting against these tariffs because we know that at the end of the day, when we put countertariffs on the table, it helps us at the negotiating table.No reason givenVague promise Claims · 7 wordsCanadians know that these times are tough, Partly on pointUnearned certaintyPromise · 17 wordsbut we can help and work together to make sure that we fight against these unjustified tariffs.Vague promise

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