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Mélanie Joly

82 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Jason Groleau (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister was elected on a promise to reach an agreement with the Americans. Today, that promise is in ruins. The unjustified escalation of the tariffs and retaliatory tariffs is causing our companies’ operating costs to soar. Norgate Metal in Beauce is already projecting $7 million in additional costs for its current contracts alone. Ultimately, Canadians are the ones who are going to pay the price. Can the Prime Minister tell us how much the retaliatory tariffs will really cost businesses in Quebec and Beauce?”
Statement grade
C–
56 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 43%Procedure 2%Promise 30%Claims 24%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 35 wordson all of these issues, what my colleagues’ questions clearly show is that they really think the government’s strategy should be to drop the retaliatory tariffs, admit defeat, accept a bad deal or give up.PositioningOff point Procedure · 2 wordsGuess what?Procedure Promise · 7 wordsWe are never going to give up, Vague promiseClaims · 20 wordsbecause these tariffs are illegal and unjustified, 1and they directly target the industrial base in my colleague’s riding of Beauce.2 Promise · 18 wordsWe are going show up for our workers and businesses.Vague promise In the meantime, we are going to fight.Partly on pointVague promise

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